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Q: Recently, I have accomplished my dissertation, but there were some troubles in my second part of it, so I turned to my big brother for help who had the same major with me. By the way, I have sent my dissertation to my supervisor, but she gave me no response. Then I needed to prepare for my reply. But I don’t know how to construct it. I felt so pissed about myself because I have not studied for three days. Yesterday, I was participated in a program called mindfulness. However, I didn’t think it was helpful, I made two new friends which made me feel better. One more thing, I have been on a diet which was a very terrible process. Through this, I thought maybe I was a person without persistence. I was not intended to deliver figure anxieties, but I thought it was a tricky task. It sucks! この表現は自然ですか?
A: × Recently, I have accomplished my dissertation, but there were some troubles in my second part of it, so I turned to my big brother for help who had the same major with me.
✓ Recently, I finished my dissertation but there were some troubles in the second part of it, so I turned to my big brother for help who studied the same major as me.

× By the way, I have sent my dissertation to my supervisor, but she gave me no response.
✓ By the way, I had sent my dissertation to my supervisor, but I got no response.

× But I don’t know how to construct it.
✓ But I didn't know how to write it.

× I felt so pissed about myself because I have not studied for three days.
✓ I felt so pissed at myself because I had not studied for three days.

× Yesterday, I was participated in a program called mindfulness.
✓ Yesterday, I participated in a program called Mindfulness.

× However, I didn’t think it was helpful, I made two new friends which made me feel better.
✓ I didn’t think it was helpful, however I made two new friends which made me feel better.

× One more thing, I have been on a diet which was a very terrible process.
✓ One more thing, I have been on a diet which has been a very terrible experience.

× Through this, I thought maybe I was a person without persistence.
✓ Because of it, I had thought that maybe I wasn't a very persistent person.

× I was not intended to deliver figure anxieties, but I thought it was a tricky task.
✓ I hadn't intended to be so anxious about my body, but it was a tricky task.

For the last part, I had interpreted it as if you had viewed your own body negatively, but I'm not sure if you meant it that way.

A lot of your tenses don't flow into each other, but there are different ways to write the tense you're trying (I think) to use. Using 'had' or not using 'had' for example are almost entirely interchangable here.

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