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Q: ‎It might be difficult for elders to accommodate their way of thinking, but the situation surrounding them is definitely different from the previous one, in which older people grew up and Japan was increasingly becoming better off and filling with huge hope in the entire society.
I think young people place emphasis on “cost performance” and “time performance” is their strategy that can make them survive in this unstable age without a net. We should take into account these factors and treat them accordingly.

Would it be possible for you to correct the above sentences? I’d like to use them when I talk about young Japanese people’s realistic and rationalistic perspective.
Thank you in advance for your help!
A: Hello ! 😊 This was an interesting read! I have made some changes, line by line, below:

It might be difficult for elders to accommodate their way of thinking, but the situation surrounding them is definitely different from the previous one, in which older people grew up and Japan was increasingly becoming better off and filling with huge hope in the entire society.
---> It might be difficult for elders to accommodate their way of thinking, but the situation surrounding them now is definitely different from the previous one in which older people grew up when Japan was increasingly becoming better off and all of society was filled with huge hope.

I think young people place emphasis on “cost performance” and “time performance” is their strategy that can make them survive in this unstable age without a net. We should take into account these factors and treat them accordingly.
----> I think young people place emphasis on “cost performance” and “time performance,” and these two measures have become their strategy to help them survive in this unstable age without a net. We should take into account these factors and treat them accordingly.

^^^ Please let me know if you have any questions about these changes! I hope you don't mind, but below, I rewrote the two sentences in a way I think I would write them. You don't have to use these, but hopefully they are also helpful in some way!

It might be difficult for elders to accommodate their way of thinking, but the current times surrounding them are definitely different from what they previously knew - a time in which older people grew up in a Japan that was developing rapidly and, by consequence, the way of life improved dramatically. It was a time when society was full of hope for the future.

I think young people place emphasis on both “cost performance” and “time performance,” and these two measures have become their strategy to help them survive in this unstable age without a net. It is my opinion that we should take into account these factors and treat them accordingly.

^^ I hope the above is helpful! 😊 Your English is amazing - well done!

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