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2018年10月14日
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Hello, good to see you. I’m Yudai Kita. Call me Yudai. I’m from Sanda, which is parched on Kobe. Sanda is a little rural. It is famous for the Kobe Sanda premium outlet. I’m 19. My birthday is May 7th. I’m a student at Kobe University and a freshman. I belong to the faculty of Engineering and the Department of Chemical Science and Engineering. The reasons that I entered this college are to be near to my house and low school expenses. My hobby is to watch soccer games. Also, I like playing soccer. I have played soccer since I was an elementary student. So, I want to make more friends who play soccer with me. I have an older brother. He is 3 years older than I. He is a student of Kaseigakuin University. I used to be on good terms with him, but now I am not friendly with him. I am a kind person. I become eager to help people in need when I find them. Moreover, I’m earnest. I always attend a class on time and pay attention in class. Thank you for listening.
Are these sentences natural?
Hello, good to see you. I’m Yudai Kita. Call me Yudai. I’m from Sanda, which is parched on Kobe. Sanda is a little rural. It is famous for the Kobe Sanda premium outlet. I’m 19. My birthday is May 7th. I’m a student at Kobe University and a freshman. I belong to the faculty of Engineering and the Department of Chemical Science and Engineering. The reasons that I entered this college are to be near to my house and low school expenses. My hobby is to watch soccer games. Also, I like playing soccer. I have played soccer since I was an elementary student. So, I want to make more friends who play soccer with me. I have an older brother. He is 3 years older than I. He is a student of Kaseigakuin University. I used to be on good terms with him, but now I am not friendly with him. I am a kind person. I become eager to help people in need when I find them. Moreover, I’m earnest. I always attend a class on time and pay attention in class. Thank you for listening.
Are these sentences natural?
Are these sentences natural?
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Yes☺️ I would only make some minor changes that are optional;
- "near" to "closer"
- "older than I" to "older than me" OR "older than I am"
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