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There have been a lot of public discussions on how the value of a college education will continue to decrease as technology improves. I disagree with this opinion for the following reasons.
First, talking to someone in person is really important for students. As you know, many students have started having online classes because of a pandemic caused by COVID-19. At first, it seemed that it was convenient and useful. Now, however, a number of students are appealing they want to go back to compass. They realize not having conversation in person makes them depressed.
Second, having an academic degree would influence on your salary. Generally speaking, people who obtained academic degrees can earn more money than people who just graduated from high schools, especially in Japan. If you want to get high salary, having academic degrees would be a key to the bright future.
この表現は自然ですか？
First, talking to someone in person is really important for students. As you know, many students have started having online classes because of a pandemic caused by COVID-19. At first, it seemed that it was convenient and useful. Now, however, a number of students are appealing they want to go back to compass. They realize not having conversation in person makes them depressed.
Second, having an academic degree would influence on your salary. Generally speaking, people who obtained academic degrees can earn more money than people who just graduated from high schools, especially in Japan. If you want to get high salary, having academic degrees would be a key to the bright future.
この表現は自然ですか？
This is the practice essay for my English examination.
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- 英語 (アメリカ)
大体合ってるけど少し不自然
There have been a lot of public discussions on how the value of a college education will continue to decrease as technology improves.
I disagree with this opinion for the following reasons.
First, talking to someone in person is really important for students.
As you know, many students have started having online classes because of athe pandemic caused by COVID-19. (if they are familiar with it already, then use the here not a)
As you know, many students have started having online classes because of athe pandemic caused by COVID-19. (if they are familiar with it already, then use the here not a)
At first, it seemed that itthey waswere convenient and useful. (classes is plural)
At first, it seemed that itthey waswere convenient and useful. (classes is plural)
Now, however, a number of students are appealing they want to go back to compasscampus. (compass is a different word)
Now, however, a number of students are appealing they want to go back to compasscampus. (compass is a different word)
They realize not having conversation in person makesis themdepressing. ( technically students cannot legally declare themselves to be depressed. only a psychologist or psychiatrist can)
They realize not having conversation in person makesis themdepressing. ( technically students cannot legally declare themselves to be depressed. only a psychologist or psychiatrist can)
Second, having an academic degree would have an influence on your salary. (also fine to say Second, an academic degree would influence your salary.)
Second, having an academic degree would have an influence on your salary. (also fine to say Second, an academic degree would influence your salary.)
Generally speaking, people who have obtained academic degrees can earn more money than people who have just graduated from high schoolsschool, especially in Japan. (also fine to say Generally speaking, people who obtain academic degrees can earn more money than people who just graduated from high school)
Generally speaking, people who have obtained academic degrees can earn more money than people who have just graduated from high schoolsschool, especially in Japan. (also fine to say Generally speaking, people who obtain academic degrees can earn more money than people who just graduated from high school)
If you want to get a high salary, having an academic degreesdegree or two would be a key to thea bright future. (also fine to say If you want a high salary, having an academic degree is the key. also fine to say Having an academic degree is the key to getting a high salary and a brighter future.)
If you want to get a high salary, having an academic degreesdegree or two would be a key to thea bright future. (also fine to say If you want a high salary, having an academic degree is the key. also fine to say Having an academic degree is the key to getting a high salary and a brighter future.)
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- 英語 (アメリカ)
大体合ってるけど少し不自然
There have been a lot of public discussions on how the value of a college education will continue to decrease as technology improves.
I disagree with this opinion for the following reasons.
First, talking to someone in person is really important for students.
As you know, many students have started having online classes because of athe pandemic caused by COVID-19 pandemic.
As you know, many students have started having online classes because of athe pandemic caused by COVID-19 pandemic.
At first, it seemed that it was convenient and useful.
Now, however, a number of students are appealingdeciding they want to go back to compass.
Now, however, a number of students are appealingdeciding they want to go back to compass.
They realize not having conversation in person makes them depressed. (depression is a very strong word here maybe consider changing it.)
They realize not having conversation in person makes them depressed. (depression is a very strong word here maybe consider changing it.)
Second, having an academic degree would influence on your salary.
Second, having an academic degree would influence on your salary.
Generally speaking, people who obtained academic degrees can earn more money than people who just graduated from high schools, especially in Japan.
If you want to get a high salary, having academic degrees would be athe key to thea bright future.
If you want to get a high salary, having academic degrees would be athe key to thea bright future.
この回答は役に立ちましたか？
- 英語 (アメリカ)
大体合ってるけど少し不自然
There have been a lot of public discussions on how the value of a college education will continue to decrease as technology improves.
I disagree with this opinion for the following reasons.
First, talking to someone in person is really important for students.
As you know, many students have started having online classes because of athe pandemic caused by COVID-19. (if they are familiar with it already, then use the here not a)
As you know, many students have started having online classes because of athe pandemic caused by COVID-19. (if they are familiar with it already, then use the here not a)
At first, it seemed that itthey waswere convenient and useful. (classes is plural)
At first, it seemed that itthey waswere convenient and useful. (classes is plural)
Now, however, a number of students are appealing they want to go back to compasscampus. (compass is a different word)
Now, however, a number of students are appealing they want to go back to compasscampus. (compass is a different word)
They realize not having conversation in person makesis themdepressing. ( technically students cannot legally declare themselves to be depressed. only a psychologist or psychiatrist can)
They realize not having conversation in person makesis themdepressing. ( technically students cannot legally declare themselves to be depressed. only a psychologist or psychiatrist can)
Second, having an academic degree would have an influence on your salary. (also fine to say Second, an academic degree would influence your salary.)
Second, having an academic degree would have an influence on your salary. (also fine to say Second, an academic degree would influence your salary.)
Generally speaking, people who have obtained academic degrees can earn more money than people who have just graduated from high schoolsschool, especially in Japan. (also fine to say Generally speaking, people who obtain academic degrees can earn more money than people who just graduated from high school)
Generally speaking, people who have obtained academic degrees can earn more money than people who have just graduated from high schoolsschool, especially in Japan. (also fine to say Generally speaking, people who obtain academic degrees can earn more money than people who just graduated from high school)
If you want to get a high salary, having an academic degreesdegree or two would be a key to thea bright future. (also fine to say If you want a high salary, having an academic degree is the key. also fine to say Having an academic degree is the key to getting a high salary and a brighter future.)
If you want to get a high salary, having an academic degreesdegree or two would be a key to thea bright future. (also fine to say If you want a high salary, having an academic degree is the key. also fine to say Having an academic degree is the key to getting a high salary and a brighter future.)
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- 英語 (イギリス)
大体合ってるけど少し不自然
There have been a lot of public discussions on how the value of a college education will continue to decrease as technology improves.
I disagree with this opinion for the following reasons.
First, talking to someone in person is really important for students.
As you know, many students have started having online classes because of a pandemic caused by COVID-19.
At first, it seemed that it was convenient and useful.
Now, however, a number of students are appealing they want to go back to compass.
They realize not having conversation in person makes them depressed.
Second, having an academic degree would influence on your salary.
Second, having an academic degree would influence on your salary.
Generally speaking, people who obtained academic degrees can earn more money than people who just graduated from high schools, especially in Japan.
If you want to get high salary, having academic degrees would be athe key to thea bright future.
If you want to get high salary, having academic degrees would be athe key to thea bright future.
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