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sai_japan
2021年9月5日

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Topic is whether advancements in science and technology have made our lives better or not.
Could you correct my English sentence?

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Sara222_
2021年9月5日

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First, various kinds of weapons have been developed, such as guns which are used in wars. As a result, a lot of people die. They enable people to kill others easier than swords do. Second, ..........we often drive to go places. It is very useful but it emits harmful gases (pollutes the air).....

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hellykoeks
2021年9月5日

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I disagree with the idea that advancements in science and technology have made our lives amy better.
I have two reasons for my beliefs in this statement.

Firstly, various weapons are constantly being developed. This is why a lot of people have passed away. For example, guns were used in the First World War and enabled people to kill each other a lot easier than using a sword would have. They even cause the same harm to people in the world to this day.

Secondly new advancements lead to global warming. For instance, we often use cars when we need to go places. It is very useful, but emits harmful gases into the atmosphere that is bad for the earth.
I understand that we are very concerned about global warming, yet we use the cars that release these harmful gases constantly, knowing the damage it can cause.

For these reasons I do not believe that advancements in science and technology has made our lives any better.

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