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2017年4月4日
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Dear Alex
Hi. I'm John who is in charge of the executive department.
I'm responding to your recent email about renting our stadium.
I have been checking our schedule.
And I'm afraid that we have a prior commitment on the day that you asked.
It's a community event that should be cooperated as a representative of the area.
Please let us know if you can change the date. We will gladly reconsider that issue.
And we would appreciate if you could send us the information below.
- The amount of the students who participated in.
- Sample activities that students may like.
- Things that should be prepared beforehand.
We look forward to having a pleasant relationship with you, and hope all goes well with your project.
Sincerely,
John
この表現は自然ですか?
Dear Alex
Hi. I'm John who is in charge of the executive department.
I'm responding to your recent email about renting our stadium.
I have been checking our schedule.
And I'm afraid that we have a prior commitment on the day that you asked.
It's a community event that should be cooperated as a representative of the area.
Please let us know if you can change the date. We will gladly reconsider that issue.
And we would appreciate if you could send us the information below.
- The amount of the students who participated in.
- Sample activities that students may like.
- Things that should be prepared beforehand.
We look forward to having a pleasant relationship with you, and hope all goes well with your project.
Sincerely,
John
この表現は自然ですか?
Hi. I'm John who is in charge of the executive department.
I'm responding to your recent email about renting our stadium.
I have been checking our schedule.
And I'm afraid that we have a prior commitment on the day that you asked.
It's a community event that should be cooperated as a representative of the area.
Please let us know if you can change the date. We will gladly reconsider that issue.
And we would appreciate if you could send us the information below.
- The amount of the students who participated in.
- Sample activities that students may like.
- Things that should be prepared beforehand.
We look forward to having a pleasant relationship with you, and hope all goes well with your project.
Sincerely,
John
この表現は自然ですか?
回答
2017年4月4日
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- 英語 (アメリカ)
大体合ってるけど少し不自然
1. "I double checked our schedule, and I'm afraid that we have a prior commitment on the day you requested." Would be better
2. The line about the community event is awkward too, add "with" after "cooperated" and then omit "a" and add then adding "s"to the end of "representative" will make it sound more natural
3. "We will gladly reconsider *the* issue" is better
Hope that helps?
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- 英語 (アメリカ)
大体合ってるけど少し不自然
1. "I double checked our schedule, and I'm afraid that we have a prior commitment on the day you requested." Would be better
2. The line about the community event is awkward too, add "with" after "cooperated" and then omit "a" and add then adding "s"to the end of "representative" will make it sound more natural
3. "We will gladly reconsider *the* issue" is better
Hope that helps?
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