質問
最終更新日:
2017年7月18日
- 日本語
-
英語 (アメリカ)
-
英語 (イギリス)
-
ポルトガル語 (ブラジル)
終了した質問
英語 (アメリカ) に関する質問
"Making dangerous appeared roads is a good way to decrease traffic accidents."
"Making the roads appear dangerous is a good way to decrease traffic accidents."
Which is better? Or are both not good?
Note:
These sentences are based on the fact.
A town has intensely made their road appear dangerous, then the traffic accidents began to decrease there. この表現は自然ですか?
"Making dangerous appeared roads is a good way to decrease traffic accidents."
"Making the roads appear dangerous is a good way to decrease traffic accidents."
Which is better? Or are both not good?
Note:
These sentences are based on the fact.
A town has intensely made their road appear dangerous, then the traffic accidents began to decrease there. この表現は自然ですか?
"Making the roads appear dangerous is a good way to decrease traffic accidents."
Which is better? Or are both not good?
Note:
These sentences are based on the fact.
A town has intensely made their road appear dangerous, then the traffic accidents began to decrease there. この表現は自然ですか?
回答
2017年7月18日
最も役に立った回答
- 英語 (アメリカ)
- 英語 (イギリス)
大体合ってるけど少し不自然
Out of the two, the second example is the most natural as the first one doesn't make sense.
I would change the sentence slightly as the way you out it makes it seem as though intentionally making the road appear dangerous is a good thing, irregardless of traffic. So I would put it as,
"Making the roads appear (more) dangerous (than they actually are) is a good way to decrease traffic accidents."
The last sentence is also quite unnatural. You put,
"A town has intensely made their road appear dangerous, then the traffic accidents began to decrease there"
I'm not too sure what you mean by 'intensely' but I'm guessing you mean the town has enforced the new methods quite quickly, or if I'm wrong, please let me know.
Because of this, I would write the sentence as so,
"A town that enforced a new method of control on their roads, by making them appear more dangerous than they actually are, has seen a decrease in vehicular traffic accidents."
It now flows a lot better and also makes sense when read, unlike the previous example.
I hope this helps! 👍🏼
評価の高い回答者
この回答は役に立ちましたか?
過去のコメントを読み込む
- 英語 (アメリカ)
- 英語 (イギリス)
大体合ってるけど少し不自然
Out of the two, the second example is the most natural as the first one doesn't make sense.
I would change the sentence slightly as the way you out it makes it seem as though intentionally making the road appear dangerous is a good thing, irregardless of traffic. So I would put it as,
"Making the roads appear (more) dangerous (than they actually are) is a good way to decrease traffic accidents."
The last sentence is also quite unnatural. You put,
"A town has intensely made their road appear dangerous, then the traffic accidents began to decrease there"
I'm not too sure what you mean by 'intensely' but I'm guessing you mean the town has enforced the new methods quite quickly, or if I'm wrong, please let me know.
Because of this, I would write the sentence as so,
"A town that enforced a new method of control on their roads, by making them appear more dangerous than they actually are, has seen a decrease in vehicular traffic accidents."
It now flows a lot better and also makes sense when read, unlike the previous example.
I hope this helps! 👍🏼
評価の高い回答者
この回答は役に立ちましたか?
- 日本語
Thanks a lot!
I was completely wrong about "intensely". I wanted to say, "intentionally".
I was completely wrong about "intensely". I wanted to say, "intentionally".
[お知らせ]語学を学習中のあなたへ
語学を上達させる方法を知っていますか❓それは、自分で書いた文章をネイティブスピーカーに添削してもらうことです!
HiNativeなら、無料でネイティブスピーカーがあなたの文章を添削してくれます✍️✨
HiNativeなら、無料でネイティブスピーカーがあなたの文章を添削してくれます✍️✨
新規登録
同じキーワードの質問
- The roads are wet. It should be the marks of having drizzled. この表現は自然ですか?
- As is known to all.that all roads lesd to Roma.it says there are various mwthods for one question...
- rose 和 roads 怎么读 は 英語 (アメリカ) で何と言いますか?
前後の質問
ありがとうございます!フィードバックは回答者には伝わりません。ご安心ください。
ありがとうございます!サービスの体験向上の参考にさせていただきます。