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2015年2月13日
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Hello! I understand this but maybe "She (really) stands out in this area. It is no wonder (because) this beautiful woman (is) walking alone (where it is) very dangerous" would flow better because:
1. "Much" usually accompanies an unquantifiable noun. An adverb like "definitely" or "really" would be much better to emphasise the extent that this woman stands out from the crowd.
2. a sentence strictly should not start with conjunctions like "Because" or "But". (But that is a rule that can be broken in less formal situations)
3. the word "But" seems unnecessary
Hope I helped :)
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- 英語 (イギリス)
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不自然
Hello! I understand this but maybe "She (really) stands out in this area. It is no wonder (because) this beautiful woman (is) walking alone (where it is) very dangerous" would flow better because:
1. "Much" usually accompanies an unquantifiable noun. An adverb like "definitely" or "really" would be much better to emphasise the extent that this woman stands out from the crowd.
2. a sentence strictly should not start with conjunctions like "Because" or "But". (But that is a rule that can be broken in less formal situations)
3. the word "But" seems unnecessary
Hope I helped :)
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Thanks a lot!! I was helpful!
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