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2016年6月7日
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I agree this statement that 'some people think that money can buy happiness'.
There is one reason to support my opinion.
First of all, we can help many people who need money to live.
For instance, I have donated small money to poor children who live in Africa every month.
Sometimes, they sent me post cards and wrote that it was thankful to manage to live so they are happy.
I also felt happy to hear that kind reply from them.
For this reason, I can buy happiness. この表現は自然ですか?
I agree this statement that 'some people think that money can buy happiness'.
There is one reason to support my opinion.
First of all, we can help many people who need money to live.
For instance, I have donated small money to poor children who live in Africa every month.
Sometimes, they sent me post cards and wrote that it was thankful to manage to live so they are happy.
I also felt happy to hear that kind reply from them.
For this reason, I can buy happiness. この表現は自然ですか?
There is one reason to support my opinion.
First of all, we can help many people who need money to live.
For instance, I have donated small money to poor children who live in Africa every month.
Sometimes, they sent me post cards and wrote that it was thankful to manage to live so they are happy.
I also felt happy to hear that kind reply from them.
For this reason, I can buy happiness. この表現は自然ですか?
Could you correct my English if there is anything wrong?
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2016年6月7日
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大体合ってるけど少し不自然
I agree to this statement that 'some people think that money can buy happiness'.
There is one reason why.
First of all, we can help many people who need money to survive.
For instance, When i donated a small amount of money to poor children of Africa every month
they send me post cards and saying they're thankful and it made their lives better so they are happy.
I felt happy hearing their replies .
And For that reason, Money can buy happiness.
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大体合ってるけど少し不自然
I agree to this statement that 'some people think that money can buy happiness'.
There is one reason why.
First of all, we can help many people who need money to survive.
For instance, When i donated a small amount of money to poor children of Africa every month
they send me post cards and saying they're thankful and it made their lives better so they are happy.
I felt happy hearing their replies .
And For that reason, Money can buy happiness.
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@liah1611: Thank you very much!
It really makes me Crystal clear!
It really makes me Crystal clear!
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大体合ってるけど少し不自然
To the poor children of africa**
They sent me**
You're welcome :)!
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大体合ってるけど少し不自然
Oh and
It really makes me crystal clear X
Now Its crystal clear to me / it makes sense O
:)
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@liah1611: Thanks again!
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