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after being held when you havent been held for months, is completely amazing. <3 and waking up next to her made it even better. <3 この表現は自然ですか?
after being held when you havent been held for months, is completely amazing. <3 and waking up next to her made it even better. <3 この表現は自然ですか?
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2017年11月22日
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大体合ってるけど少し不自然
It sounds pretty natural! However, if you wish to improve your sentences, I would suggest starting off your first sentence with “Being held after not being held for months is completely amazing,” because if you are trying to form a complex sentence, you would need to add a subject to the section after the comma. Formatting it to be a simple sentence, though, would make it a bit clearer than if you were to fix it as a complex sentence. Furthermore, you should not start off a simple sentence with “and”, and putting “<3” is informal. It depends on who you’re speaking to, though, so if you are only talking to a friend putting “<3” would be okay.
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- 英語 (アメリカ)
大体合ってるけど少し不自然
It sounds pretty natural! However, if you wish to improve your sentences, I would suggest starting off your first sentence with “Being held after not being held for months is completely amazing,” because if you are trying to form a complex sentence, you would need to add a subject to the section after the comma. Formatting it to be a simple sentence, though, would make it a bit clearer than if you were to fix it as a complex sentence. Furthermore, you should not start off a simple sentence with “and”, and putting “<3” is informal. It depends on who you’re speaking to, though, so if you are only talking to a friend putting “<3” would be okay.
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