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Could you help me to correct my introduction of HiNative.
Thanks!
Hi, I'm Yui, live in Tokyo, Japan.
I was in Boston, US, when I was 10 to 12 years old.
When I was in US, I was shy a boy and hated to study English.
Now I'm 30 years old and working at a maker as a sale planner.
English is very important skill to advance my job.
Therefore, I decided to learn English again.
Also, I hope English helps me enjoy my hobby, like watching movies and reading SF more.
Could you help me to correct my introduction of HiNative.
Thanks!
Hi, I'm Yui, live in Tokyo, Japan.
I was in Boston, US, when I was 10 to 12 years old.
When I was in US, I was shy a boy and hated to study English.
Now I'm 30 years old and working at a maker as a sale planner.
English is very important skill to advance my job.
Therefore, I decided to learn English again.
Also, I hope English helps me enjoy my hobby, like watching movies and reading SF more.
Thanks!
Hi, I'm Yui, live in Tokyo, Japan.
I was in Boston, US, when I was 10 to 12 years old.
When I was in US, I was shy a boy and hated to study English.
Now I'm 30 years old and working at a maker as a sale planner.
English is very important skill to advance my job.
Therefore, I decided to learn English again.
Also, I hope English helps me enjoy my hobby, like watching movies and reading SF more.
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2016年9月12日
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could you please help me correct my introduction on HiNative. thanks!
Hi, I'm Yui. I live in Tokyo. I lived in Boston from when I was 10 to 12.
when I was in the US, I was shy and hated studying English. now I'm 30 and working at a maker as a sales planner (not sure what those are!). English is a very important skill for advancement at my job, so I've decided to learn English again.
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For the sentence about living in Boston, it might be better to say "I lived in Boston for 2 years when I was younger."
I do have a few questions: What is a maker? And just to verify, is SF Sci-Fi (Science Fiction)?
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Hi, I'm Yui. I live in Tokyo, Japan.
I lived in Boston, US, when I was 10 to 12 years old.
When I was in the US, I was a shy boy and hated to study English.
Now I'm 30 years old and work at a maker as a sales planner.
English is a very important skill to have to excel at my job.
Therefore, I decided to learn English again.
Also, I hope English helps me enjoy my hobbies, like watching movies and reading SF more.
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Instead of saying "shy boy" you should say "I was quite shy" or "l was a bit shy". That way you will sound more natural. Also, it's better to say Sci-Fi instead of SF.
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could you please help me correct my introduction on HiNative. thanks!
Hi, I'm Yui. I live in Tokyo. I lived in Boston from when I was 10 to 12.
when I was in the US, I was shy and hated studying English. now I'm 30 and working at a maker as a sales planner (not sure what those are!). English is a very important skill for advancement at my job, so I've decided to learn English again.
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Hi, I'm Yui. I live in Tokyo, Japan. I lived in Boston, (which state? Massachusetts?) US, when I was 10 to 12 years old. (This is fine, but you can also say "When I was 10 to 12 years old, I lived in Boston, US.")
When I was in the US, I was shy a boy and hated studying English.
Now I'm 30 years old and working at a maker (do you mean market?) as a sale planner. (I'm a bit confused at your job. Do you mean market sale's planner or a market salesman?)
English is a very important skill to advance in my job.
Therefore, I decided to learn English again.
Also, I hope English helps me enjoy my hobbies more, like watching movies and reading SF. (You can say "SF" however most people refer to it as "Sci-Fi", but I think most people will understand what you mean by "SF")
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Hi, I'm Yui. I live in Tokyo, Japan.
I used to live in Boston,US when I was younger.
During my years in US I was very reserved and shy person. I also didn't like styding English.
Now I'm 30 years old and I work at a market (?) as a sale planner.
It is very important because of my job to speak advanced English well, therefore, I decided to learn English again.
Also, I hope English helps me enjoy my hobbies: watching movies and reading more sci-fi books.
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I guess "maker" refers to "manufacturing company", because they "make" products.😌
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@yui-eng: the most professional example so far is the one by @SCDP: I would focus on that one but continue to improve it.
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Thanks for your reply, everyone.
and sorry for late reply.
I realized my mistake. The words "Maker" and "SF" are Japanese English.
What I wanted to say are "Manufacturer" and "Sci-Fi".
I'll correct my sentence and post my introduction.
and sorry for late reply.
I realized my mistake. The words "Maker" and "SF" are Japanese English.
What I wanted to say are "Manufacturer" and "Sci-Fi".
I'll correct my sentence and post my introduction.
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